ÿWPCK ™"–ç‡gÛø,Û©˜ftgÛR'0éI?ƒºXÌvתpÝÀ^•´mäÁïcr…`¶q]VÆ–sDÁ§¼ð™¶é÷/-Ûù£Ç懭Ʌõ½*þÇûƒš‡aJÍ̹$\RG»ûÔ»œú«ŸtÝD«C€ùEqÑ9q7Ó€¤†Ûü\5ü‹šr• Š*ë„Õ—ÑÝõŠî¯âbv¾ãý¥ã"ßH;ˆ(ÀŒs~äâG‘è?(˜+ðNÒ$K%ß“>Û‘‚3þ^1Ù4›Ù‘;=Cuh<÷<¼‹&’Ÿ[ó4¡eÕ˜4¿Ç EÂa ÐC,Õà™“cPŽÊhÿBâ¨Ó/¬`Uyâo^œ±Y/`¾£‚äÖÐJØ‹|gSž„SHZ0mIoj#²WªP{£»Bòè3/,jöÕ,M½‘ê<Î~U½9ŵ¸£”×zô£:‘ lVàn™x!´4åÍã ðÊ؉”‚3ûñ®8.ñÅ1r6üJ¿ #ɨUNq %¿ 0:ÅÅ^ ÿw 4#2 m4˜ 0&Öd9 Z‹6Times New Roman RegularX(üœ$¡¡ÔUSUS.,ÔT`!?é QJE=ê:i¢×+003|xÿU‹ÿÀÀÀÝ ƒüœ!ÝÔUSUS.,ÔÝ  ÝÔ_ÔContentÐ ° Ðà  àAs€Collingwood€remarks,€the€notebookððs€stratification€is€complex.€His€interpretation€appearsÐ ªú Ðcorrect€in€broad€outline,€though€in€need€of€refinement.€From€fall€1831€to€spring€1833,€Ruskin€started€atÐ ¤ô Ðthe€beginning€of€the€notebook€and€worked€sequentially€through€drafts€of€€Athens€€and€shorter€poems€(òòaóó,Ð žî Ðbelow).€The€last€poem€in€òòaóó€is€a€May€1833€birthday€poem€for€John€James,€no.€178.€Shortly€thereafter,Ð ˜è Ðthe€family€departed€for€their€first€Continental€tour.Ð ’ â Ðà  àThen,€probably€after€their€return€in€late€September€1833,€Ruskin€continued€working€forwardÐ Œ Ü Ðfrom€òòaóó,€drafting€the€so„called€Account€of€a€Tour€of€the€Continent,€the€metrical€journal€of€the€tour€(òòbóó,Ð † Ö Ðbelow).€At€some€point€while€drafting€the€Account,€he€worked€out€an€ambitious€proposed€table€ofÐ € Ð Ðcontents€on€the€inside€back€boards€of€MS€VIII€(òòjóó,€below).€The€Account€occupied€Ruskin€well€intoÐ z Ê  Ð1834,€taking€time€out€only€in€December€1833€to€prepare€some€poems€for€New€Yearððs,€which€heÐ tÄ  Ðstarted€upside„down€at€the€opposite€end€of€the€notebook€Ô_Ô(òòcÔ_Ôóó,€below;€Collingwood€misdated€this€sectionÐ n¾  Ðas€a€year€later).€He€also€took€time€in€February„May€1834€to€prepare€some€poems€for€his€fatherððsÐ h¸  Ðbirthday,€which€he€composed€amid€the€later€drafts€of€the€tour€poem€(òòbóó,€below).Ð b²  Ðà  àNow€well€into€1834,€Ruskin€was€juggling€the€composition€of€the€Account€(including€its€fair„Ð \¬  Ðcopying€and€elaborate€illustration€in€MS€IX)€with€continuing€work€on€the€Sermons€on€the€PentateuchÐ V¦ Ð(MSS€Ô_ÔIIAÔ_Ô„E)€and€on€the€Mineralogical€Dictionary€(MS€IVD),€while€also€making€his€debut€as€aÐ P  Ðscientific€author€with€papers€in€òòThe€Magazine€of€Natural€Historyóó€(nos.€190„91,€193).€And€then€thereÐ Jš Ðwere€his€lessons.€With€projects€piling€up,€in€December€1834€he€skipped€ahead€in€MS€VIII,€asÐ D” ÐCollingwood€interprets€the€sequence,€in€order€to€leave€open€several€blank€pages€following€the€draft€ofÐ >Ž Ðthe€Account€for€its€completion,€and€to€start€a€new€section€of€shorter€pieces€beginning€with€a€poem€forÐ 8ˆ ÐNew€Yearððs€1835.€This€section€extends€to€odes€for€his€fatherððs€birthday€in€May€(òòdóó,€below).Ð 2‚ Ðà  àMeanwhile,€the€metrical€journal€of€the€Continental€tour€(òòbóó)€was€abandoned,€perhaps€becauseÐ ,| ÐRuskin€was€set€back€by€pleurisy€in€spring€1835€and€then€distracted€by€a€second€Continental€tour,Ð &v Ðundertaken€for€his€recovery€between€June€and€December.€This€new€tour€required€its€own€metricalÐ  p Ðaccount€(no.€203,€MS€X).€The€new€travel€poem€would€prove€less€ambitious€than€no.€180€in€itsÐ j Ðpresentation,€lacking€the€€engraved€€illustration€and€€copperplate€€printing€of€MS€IX,€but€no.€203€wouldÐ d Ðprove€more€ambitious€in€its€Byronic€verse€structure.€This€new€metrical€journal€was€not€drafted€in€MSÐ ^ ÐVIII€(in€fact€no€rough€draft€apparently€is€extant),€but€Ruskin€did€use€the€notebook€for€several€shorterÐ  X Ðpieces€inspired€by€the€1835€tour.€These€were€drafted€in€the€blank€pages€formerly€allotted€to€theÐ !R Ðcompletion€of€the€earlier€tour€poem,€no.€180€(òòeóó,€below).Ð ü!L Ðà  àIn€the€space€left€òòafteróó€òòdóó„„i.e.,€following€the€1835€New€Yearððs€through€May€birthday€1835Ð ö"F Ðsection„„Ruskin€sketched€some€other,€shorter€1835„36€poems€(òòfóó,€below).€The€precise€dates€of€theÐ ð#@  Ðpieces€in€òòeóó€and€òòfóó€are€highly€conjectural,€as€explained€in€nos.€207„14.€At€best,€these€pieces€can€beÐ ê$: ! Ðattributed€to€between€July€1835€(the€earliest€point€when€the€family€visited€the€places€associated€withÐ ä%4!" Ðthese€poems)€and€May€1836€(when€Ruskin€wrote€a€birthday€ode€for€his€father€that€sets€an€upperÐ Þ&."# Ðboundary€for€the€group€in€òòfóó).Ð Ø'(#$ Ðà  àNext,€taking€up€space€still€remaining€after€òòeóó„„i.e.,€following€the€section€associated€with€the€1835Ð Ò("$% Ðtour„„Ruskin€launched€a€new€kind€of€verse€for€him,€Ô_ÔShelleyanÔ_Ô€rather€than€Byronic.€His€formerly€ratherÐ Ì)%& Ðunsentimental€and€satiric€Ô_ÔworldviewÔ_Ô€had€suddenly€been€upset€by€the€arrival€of€Ô_ÔAdleÔ_Ô€Ô_ÔDomecqÔ_Ô€at€Ô_ÔHerneÔ_ÔÐ Æ*&' ÐHill€in€January€1836.€The€sequence€of€Ô_ÔAdleÔ_Ô€poems€(òògóó,€below)€is€continuous€with€the€tour„inspiredÐ À+'( Ðshorter€poems€in€òòeóó.€In€fact,€a€transition€between€the€two€groups€is€marked€by€Venetian€pieces€that€canÐ º, () Ðbe€seen€as€arising€either€from€the€Continental€or€Ô_ÔAdleÔ_Ô€experiences.€This€sequence€could€have€been€inÐ ´-)* ÐÔ_Ôprocess€of€composition€for€quite€some€time,€perhaps€into€the€next€year€(see€note€to€no.€240).Ð ° Ðà  àFinally,€in€May€1836,€during€the€early€stage€of€the€Adle€sequence€in€òògóó,€Ruskin€used€someÐ ªú Ðmore€space€following€òòfóó€to€draft€his€fatherððs€birthday€ode,€no.€231.€After€this,€he€continued€with€the€verseÐ ¤ô Ðdrama€€Marcolini,€€no.€241,€for€many€pages€(òòhóó,€below).Ð žî Ðà  àThe€remainder€of€the€contents,€òòióó€and€òòkóó,€consists€of€slight€sketches€and€lesson€work.€DetailedÐ ˜è Ðsequences€of€contents€within€the€sections€òòaóó„òòkóó€are€as€follows:Ð ’ â Ðà  àòòaóó)€Just€as€in€MS€VI€from€late€1830€through€1831,€Ruskin€had€interleaved€draft€of€€Iteriad€€withÐ Œ Ü Ðshorter€poems,€so€in€the€first€part€of€MS€VIII€from€fall€1831€he€interleaved€draft€of€the€unfinished€epic€Ð † Ö ÐAthens€€with€shorter€poems.€In€fact€the€two€projects€overlap€briefly€at€the€beginning€of€MS€VIII€with€aÐ € Ð Ðsmall€portion€of€the€fourth€book€of€€Iteriad€€following€a€portion€of€€Athens,€€and€at€some€point€he€beganÐ z Ê  Ðto€fair„copy€€Athens€€into€MS€VII€following€the€fair€copy€of€€Iteriad.€€The€sequence€of€this€section€is€asÐ tÄ  Ðfollows:€nos.€134a„b€(p.€1),€135€(stanzas€1„4,€pp.€1„2;€following€stanza€4,€bottom€p.€2,€Ruskin€wrote€Ð n¾  ÐFor€Continuation€[of€€Athens€]€see€page€14€),€91€(bk.€4:297„320,€p.€3,€line€numbers€identified€by€laterÐ h¸  Ðhand€at€top€of€page),€137€(p.€4),€138€(p.€5),€139€(pp.€5„7),€140€(p.€7),€141€(pp.€7„8),€142€(pp.€8„9),Ð b²  Ð143€(p.€9),€144€(pp.€9„11),€145€(p.€11),€146€(p.€11„12),€147€(pp.€12„13),€148€(p.€14),€135€(stanzasÐ \¬  Ð5„9,€pp.€14„16),€149€(p.€16),€150€(p.€17),€135€(stanzas€10„12€entitled€€Athens,€€pp.€17„18),€151€(p.Ð V¦ Ð18),€152€(p.€19),€135€(stanzas€13„14€entitled€€Athens,€€p.€19),€153€(pp.€19„20),€154€(pp.€20„21),€135Ð P  Ð(stanzas€15„18€entitled€€Athens,€€pp.€21„22),€155€(pp.€22„24),€156€(p.€25),€158€(p.€25),€159€(p.€26),Ð Jš Ð160€(pp.€26„28),€135€(stanza€19,€probably€entitled€€Athens€€but€see€note€to€no.€160,€pp.€28„29),€161Ð D” Ð(p.€29),€162€(p.€30),€163€(pp.€30„31),€164€(pp.€31„37),€135€(stanzas€20„21€entitled€€Athens,€€pp.€37„Ð >Ž Ð38),€165€(p.€38),€167€(pp.€38„41),€135€(unnumbered€stanza€entitled€€Athens,€€p.€41),€168€(pp.€41„42),Ð 8ˆ Ð169€(p.€42),€176€(pp.€43,€45€[Ruskinððs€page€numbering€omits€44]),€177€(pp.€45„52),€177a€(p.€49,Ð 2‚ Ðinterrupting€no.€177),€178€(pp.€52„53).Ð ,| Ðà  àòòbóó)€Following€no.€178€begins€the€draft€of€no.€180,€Account€of€a€Tour€of€the€Continent.€Some€ofÐ &v Ðthis€draft€could€have€been€composed€during€the€tour€itself,€between€May€11€and€September€21,€1833;Ð  p Ðhowever,€the€sequence€of€parts€in€MS€VIII€does€not€follow€that€of€the€actual€tour.€Certainly,€much€wasÐ j Ðwritten€in€the€fall,€winter,€and€spring€after€the€familyððs€return.Ð d Ðà  àMost€of€the€poem€is€here€in€MS€VIII„„some€sections€occuring€in€MS€IA,€and€others€in€VII€andÐ ^ ÐXI€(the€latter€two€manuscripts€containing€fair€copy€in€hands€other€than€Ruskinððs,€not€holograph€draft).Ð  X ÐWhen€the€draft€begins€following€no.€178,€it€was€apparently€already€underway€(see€below),€so€someÐ !R Ðdraft€has€probably€disappeared.€MS€VIII€also€includes€portions€that€Ruskin€failed€to€fair„copy€in€MSÐ ü!L ÐIX,€the€main€manuscript,€which€was€left€incomplete.€These€unused€portions€in€MS€VIII€areÐ ö"F Ðincorporated€into€the€version€of€the€Account€as€printed€in€òòWorksóó,€thus€conjecturally€reconstructing€theÐ ð#@  Ðjournal€beyond€the€point€where€Ruskin€left€off€in€MS€IX€(see€òòWorksóó,€2:364€n.€1).€Some€of€thisÐ ê$: ! 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Ðà  àThe€sequence€of€the€drafts€in€MS€VIII€begins€as€follows.€First,€immediately€following€aÐ Þ&."# Ðhorizontal€line€drawn€beneath€no.€178,€occur€the€lines€€Oh€are€there€spirits,€can€there€be,€€which€CookÐ Ø'(#$ Ðand€Wedderburn€print€in€a€note€(òòWorksóó€2:384€n.€1)€and€remark€as€preceding€the€prose€€Source€of€theÐ Ò("$% ÐArveron€€and€the€lyric€€I€woke€to€hear€the€lullaby€€(the€latter€taken€by€them€as€the€start€of€€The€Arve€atÐ Ì)%& ÐChamouni€).€One€notices€that€the€two€lyrics€are€joined€by€a€system€of€line€numbering:€the€fifth€line€of€Ð Æ*&' ÐOh€are€there€spirits,€can€there€be€€is€numbered€by€Ruskin€as€€510€;€the€tenth€line€as€€515€;€four€moreÐ À+'( Ðlines€take€the€poem€to€the€bottom€of€the€page€(p.€53€of€MS€VIII);€and€then,€while€the€next€verso€andÐ º, () Ðthird€of€a€recto€are€taken€up€by€the€intervening€prose€€Source€of€the€Arveron,€€the€next€line€of€poetry€(€Ô_ÔIÐ ´-)* Ðwoke€to€hear€the€lullaby,€€p.€55€of€MS€VIII)€is€numbered€by€Ruskin€as€€520€„„continuous€with€line€519Ð ° Ðat€the€bottom€of€p.€53€of€MS€VIII.Ð ªú Ðà  àSince€these€line€Ô_ÔnumberingsÔ_Ô€for€the€poetry€drafts€provide€possible€clues€to€reconstruction€of€theÐ ¤ô Ðpoem,€they€are€included€in€the€following€list.€However,€this€line€numbering€cannot€òònecessarilyóó€be€takenÐ žî Ðas€indicating€Ruskinððs€intended€ordering€of€the€sections,€perhaps€not€even€his€order€of€composition.€TheÐ ˜è Ðnumbers€may€function€as€an€ongoing€but€arbitrary€guide,€without€respect€for€beginnings€and€endings€ofÐ ’ â Ðseparate€pieces,€perhaps€as€an€aide€for€fair„copying.€The€line€numbering€even€extends€into€poems€thatÐ Œ Ü Ðclearly€do€not€form€part€of€the€Account,€such€as€€The€Crystal€Hunter.€Ð † Ö Ðà  àTake€as€an€example€the€manuscript€appearance€of€the€prose€section€on€Brussels€(see€below€forÐ € Ð Ðcomplete€details).€Three„quarters€down€the€page,€62r,€Ruskin€composed€the€start€of€this€passage,Ð z Ê  Ðentitling€it€€Part€of€Brussels,€€and€extending€the€draft€halfway€onto€p.€62v.€Here€the€draft€stops€in€mid„Ð tÄ  Ðsentence€(€.€.€.€circumnavigating,€for€€),€followed€by€a€poem€€Oh€softly€blew€the€mountingÐ n¾  Ðbreeze€€(entitled€by€the€editors€as€€Ô_ÔChiavennaÔ_Ô€).€The€poem€is€numbered€by€Ruskin€810„22,€which€isÐ h¸  Ðcontinuous€with€the€last€installment€of€verse€(but€a€quite€different€poem),€778„809€(the€poem€entitled€Ð b²  ÐThe€Black€Forest€€by€the€editors).€The€remainder€of€the€prose€passage€on€Brussels€(€perambulating€.€.€.Ð \¬  Ðtread€on€it€softly€)€begins€at€the€top€of€the€next€recto,€63r,€and€finishes€on€63v.€An€obvious€inference€isÐ V¦ Ðthat€Ruskin€wrapped€the€prose€around€the€poem,€already€drafted€in€its€place.€The€line€numbers,€then,Ð P  Ðmight€have€been€added€to€the€poetry€later€on,€telling€us€nothing€about€the€sequence€of€composition.Ð Jš Ðà  àHowever,€there€is€another,€equally€plausible€explanation.€Note€that€in€the€fair€copy€of€thisÐ D” Ðpassage,€MS€IX,€a€line€ends€€circumnavigating€for€„„the€€for€€neatly€crowded€into€the€justified€rightÐ >Ž Ðmargin.€The€next€line€begins€with€€perambulating.„„€€One€may€infer€that€Ruskin€fair„copied€in€MS€IX€asÐ 8ˆ Ðfar€as€he€had€drafted€in€MS€VIII€(p.€62v);€crossed€out€the€last€word€in€draft,€which€he€could€not€fit€on€aÐ 2‚ Ðline€(€€);€stopped€to€draft€the€poem€€Oh€softly€blew€the€mounting€breeze,€€lines€which€heÐ ,| Ðnumbered€in€sequence;€and€then€resumed€drafting€the€prose€passage,€but€changing€his€mind€about€theÐ &v Ðnext€word„„€perambulating,€€rather€than€€traversing.€Ð  p Ðà  àEither€of€these€scenario€can€be€supported€by€the€evidence.€Perhaps€the€safest€conclusion€is€that,Ð j Ðunlike€the€disposition€of€parts€of€€Ô_ÔIteriadÔ_Ô€€in€MS€VI,€nothing€in€the€arrangement€of€the€Account€sectionsÐ d Ðstrongly€argues€òòforóó€Ruskinððs€erratic€use€of€the€manuscript.€Certain€poems€and€prose€pieces€could€haveÐ ^ Ðbeen€composed€at€wide€and€erratic€intervals€in€the€notebook;€however,€the€entries€appear€regular,Ð  X Ðworkmanlike,€and€sequential.Ð !R Ðà  àThe€order€is€as€follows:€€Oh€are€there€spirits,€€poem,€untitled,€numbered€as€506„19,€p.€53Ð ü!L Ð(òòWorksóó€2:384€n.€1).€The€€Source€of€the€Ô_ÔArveronÔ_Ô,€€prose,€titled€by€Ruskin,€pp.€54„55€(òòWorksóó€2:386„Ð ö"F Ð87).€€I€woke€to€hear€the€lullaby,€€poem,€untitled,€numbered€520„64,€pp.€55„55v€(òòWorksóó€2:384„85,Ð ð#@  Ðentitled€by€editors,€not€Ruskin,€as€€The€Ô_ÔArveÔ_Ô€at€Ô_ÔChamouniÔ_Ô€).€Note€that€the€last€page€numbered€byÐ ê$: ! ÐRuskin€is€p.€55,€and€hereafter€p.€nos.€refer€to€the€numbering€of€Ô_ÔrectosÔ_Ô€only,€in€pencil,€by€another,€laterÐ ä%4!" Ðhand.Ð Þ&."# Ðà  à€Ô_ÔAndernachtÔ_Ô,€€prose€section€only,€titled€by€Ruskin,€pp.€55v„56v€(òòWorksóó€2:354„55;€fair„copiedÐ Ø'(#$ Ðin€MS€IX).€€St.€Ô_ÔGoarÔ_Ô€is€the€least€and€sweetest€place,€€prose€section€only,€untitled,€p.€56v€(òòWorksóóÐ Ò("$% Ð2:360„61;€fair„copied€in€MS€IX).€€There€is€a€charmed€peace,€that€aye,€€poem,€untitled,€numbered€565„Ð Ì)%& Ð614,€pp.€56v„57v€(òòWorksóó€2:366„67,€entitled€by€editors,€not€Ruskin,€as€€The€Alps€from€Schaffhausen€).€Ð Æ*&' ÐÔ_ÔViamalaÔ_Ô€€[sic],€poem,€titled€by€Ruskin,€numbered€615„46,€pp.€57v„58r€(òòWorksóó€2:369).€€Ô_ÔSplugenÔ_Ô,€Ð À+'( Ðpoem,€titled€by€Ruskin,€numbered€647„95,€pp.€58r„59r€(òòWorksóó€2:370„71).€€The€€Summit,€Ð º, () Ðpoem,€titled€by€Ruskin,€numbered€696„751,€pp.€59r„60r€(òòWorksóó€2:371„72).€€The€descent,€€poem,Ð ´-)* Ðtitled€by€Ruskin,€numbered€752„77,€pp.€60r„60v€(òòWorksóó€2:372„73).€€The€Meuse,€€prose,€titled€byÐ ° ÐRuskin,€pp.€60v„61r€(òòWorksóó€2:349„50,€fair„copied€in€MS€IX).€€Cologne,€€prose€(first€paragraph€only,Ð ªú Ðwith€€fragment€€noted€by€Ruskin€at€end),€titled€by€Ruskin,€p.€61r€(òòWorksóó€2:351„52,€fair„copied€in€MSÐ ¤ô ÐIX).€€Oh€the€morn€looked€bright€over€hill€and€dale,€€poem,€untitled,€numbered€778„809,€pp.€61r„61v,Ð žî Ð(òòWorksóó€2:365„66;€draft€includes€the€final€line€of€the€poem,€which€the€editors,€oddly,€print€in€a€note,€366Ð ˜è Ðn.€1;€entitled€by€editors,€not€Ruskin,€as€€The€Black€Forest€).€€It€was€a€wide€stretchy€sweep,€€prose,Ð ’ â Ðuntitled,€p.€62r€(òòWorksóó€2:360€n.€1).€This€last€prose€is€incorrectly€Ô_ÔafixedÔ_Ô€by€the€editors€to€the€end€of€the€Ð Œ Ü ÐSt.€Ô_ÔGoarÔ_Ô€€poem,€whose€draft€they€say€€contains€at€this€point€the€.€.€.€prose€passage€;€however,€this€proseÐ † Ö Ðhas€no€association€whatever€with€€St.€Ô_ÔGoarÔ_Ô.€€It€is€more€likely€associated€with€the€poem€it€doesÐ € Ð Ðimmediately€follow„„not€€St.€Ô_ÔGoarÔ_Ô,€€but€€Oh€the€morn€looked€bright€over€hill€and€dale,€€whose€lines€8Ð z Ê  Ðand€27€identify€what€the€prose€passage€calls€€our€entrance€into€the€narrow€dell€above€mentioned.€Ð tÄ  Ðà  à€Part€of€Brussels,€€prose€(part€of€first€paragraph,€€Brussels€is€a€lovely€.€.€.€for€circumnavigating,Ð n¾  Ðfor€€),€titled€by€Ruskin,€pp.€62r„62v€(òòWorksóó€2:347;€fair„copied€in€MS€IX).€€Oh€softly€blewÐ h¸  Ðthe€mounting€breeze,€€poem,€untitled,€numbered€810„22,€p.€62v€(òòWorksóó€2:373;€entitled€by€editors,€notÐ b²  Ðby€Ruskin,€as€€Ô_ÔChiavennaÔ_Ô€).€Resumption€of€prose€on€Brussels,€€perambulating,€Oh€woe€.€.€.€tread€on€itÐ \¬  Ðsoftly,€€untitled,€pp.€63r„63v€(òòWorksóó€2:347„48;€fair„copied€in€MS€IX).€Thus€the€earlier€€Part€ofÐ V¦ ÐBrussels€€is€resumed€at€the€top€of€the€following€recto€and€drafted€to€the€end,€as€fair„copied€in€MS€IX.Ð P  Ðà  à€Ô_ÔLagoÔ_Ô€Ô_ÔdiÔ_Ô€Como,€€poem,€titled€by€Ruskin,€numbered€823„63,€pp.€63v„64r€(òòWorksóó€2:373„74).€Ð Jš ÐOf€various€trees€a€vista€green,€€poem,€untitled,€numbered€864„89,€pp.€64r„64v€(òòWorksóó€2:378„79).Ð D” ÐAlthough€these€lines€are€not€entitled€by€Ruskin,€a€later€and€clearly€associated€draft€is€entitled€by€him€Ð >Ž ÐGenoa.€€Separated€from€the€preceding€€Ô_ÔLagoÔ_Ô€Ô_ÔdiÔ_Ô€Como€€by€a€horizontal€line,€this€section€of€€Genoa€Ð 8ˆ Ðconstitutes€only€lines€19„44€of€the€poem€as€printed.Ð 2‚ Ðà  à€It€was€an€eve€of€summer,€mild,€€poem,€untitled,€numbered€890„920,€pp.€64v„65r€(òòWorksóóÐ ,| Ð2:377„78).€Entitled€by€the€editors,€not€by€Ruskin,€as€€Ô_ÔLagoÔ_Ô€Ô_ÔMaggioreÔ_Ô,€€the€poem€is€separated€from€theÐ &v Ðpreceding€€Genoa€€by€a€line€space€(and€Ruskin€drew€stars€following,€and€on€the€same€line€as,€the€lastÐ  p Ðline€of€the€Genoa€poem).€This€draft€is€missing€the€last€eight€lines€of€the€poem€as€printed,€lines€that€occurÐ j Ðlater€in€MS€VIII;€however,€as€argued€below,€it€is€not€clear€that€those€eight€lines€do€in€fact€belong€with€Ð d ÐÔ_ÔLagoÔ_Ô€Ô_ÔMaggioreÔ_Ô.€Ð ^ Ðà  à€Aix€la€Ô_ÔChapelleÔ_Ô,€€prose,€titled€by€Ruskin,€pp.€65r„66r€(òòWorksóó€2:350„51;€fair„copied€in€MSÐ  X ÐIX).€At€the€end€of€the€sixth€paragraph,€after€the€word€€monarch,€€appears€in€draft€the€one„wordÐ !R Ðsentence,€€Wake„„„„.€€This€sentence€appears€neither€in€the€fair€copy,€MS€IX,€nor€in€the€Library€Edition.Ð ü!L ÐSince€this€sentence€falls€at€the€bottom€of€p.€65v,€here€may€be€another€indication€of€Ruskin€interruptingÐ ö"F Ðhis€rough„drafting€to€fair„copy€in€MS€IX.€On€the€following€recto,€66r,€the€remainder€of€the€proseÐ ð#@  Ðpassage€is€drafted€(€Saw€Ô_ÔCharlemagnesÔ_Ô€chair€.€.€.€Goodnight€).€The€remainder€of€the€page€is€filled€withÐ ê$: ! 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Ðresemblance€to€any€of€the€drawings€in€MS€IX.€Curiously,€a€number€€100€€is€noted€on€the€same€line€asÐ Þ&."# Ðthe€end€of€the€prose€passage;€then,€in€the€margin€and€next€to€the€sketches€are€the€numbers€€925€€and€Ð Ø'(#$ Ð930,€€apparently€awaiting€the€continuation€of€the€poetry,€but€the€sketches€were€drawn€over€top€of€theÐ Ò("$% Ðnumbers€instead.€When€the€poetry€does€start€on€the€verso€of€this€page,€Ruskin€does€not€beginÐ Ì)%& Ðnumbering€from€921€(see€€Ô_ÔLagoÔ_Ô€Ô_ÔMaggioreÔ_Ô€€above),€but€from€939„„as€if€he€did€use€those€intervening€Ð Æ*&' Ð925€€and€€930€€numbers€for€poetry€draft,€elsewhere.Ð À+'( Ðà  à€Smiling€€from€those€bright€rays€kiss,€€poem,€untitled,€numbered€939„68,€pp.€66v„67rÐ º, () Ð(òòWorksóó€2:361„62;€fair„copied€in€MS€IX).€Although€these€lines€are€not€entitled€by€Ruskin€in€this€place,Ð ´-)* Ðthey€are€clearly€associated€with€draft,€below,€that€he€does€entitle€€Heidelberg.€€The€Library€Edition€hasÐ ° Ðgreatly€confused€the€description€of€this€passage.€In€a€note,€the€editors€print€what€they€represent€as€draftÐ ªú Ðlines€in€MS€VIII,€dropped€from€the€fair€copy€(òòWorksóó€2:361€n.€1).€These€lines€are€not€from€MS€VIII,Ð ¤ô Ðbut€from€MS€IX.€In€other€words,€if€one€restores€these€lines€to€their€place€where€noted€by€Cook€andÐ žî ÐÔ_ÔWedderburnÔ_Ô,€one€reads€the€poem€as€it€in€fact€appears€in€fair€copy,€MS€IX.€When€this€editorialÐ ˜è Ðcorrection€is€made,€the€30€lines€from€MS€VIII,€beginning€with€€Smiling€€from€those€bright€raysÐ ’ â Ðkiss,€€may€be€recognized€as€draft€for€lines€19„48€of€the€fair€copy„„i.e.,€counting€in€the€lines€that€CookÐ Œ Ü Ðand€Ô_ÔWedderburnÔ_Ô€inexplicably€drop€into€a€note.Ð † Ö Ðà  à€The€traditions€of€the€Rhine,€€prose,€untitled,€pp.€67r„67v€(òòWorksóó€2:368;€entitled€by€editors,€notÐ € Ð ÐRuskin,€as€€The€Rhine€).€€Oh€warmly€down€the€sunbeams€fell,€€poem,€untitled,€numbered€973„1081,€pp.Ð z Ê  Ð67v„69r€(òòWorksóó€2:355„58;€fair„copied€in€MS€IX).€These€lines€are€entitled€by€Ruskin€in€MS€IX,€not€inÐ tÄ  ÐMS€VIII,€as€€Ô_ÔEhrenbreitsteinÔ_Ô.€€Note€that€this€poem€does€not€begin€with€numbering€969,€as€expected,Ð n¾  Ðbut€with€973.Ð h¸  Ðà  à€Continuation€Heidelberg,€€poem,€titled€by€Ruskin,€numbered€1083„1155,€pp.€69r„70v€(òòWorksóóÐ b²  Ð2:362„64;€fair„copied€in€MS€IX).€(Strictly,€the€numbering€should€begin€with€1082,€the€last€line€of€Ð \¬  ÐÔ_ÔEhrenbreitsteinÔ_Ô€€being€1081,€but€Ruskin€appears€to€have€counted€the€line€with€the€title€€ContinuationÐ V¦ ÐHeidelberg.€)€A€continuation€of€the€earlier€section€of€€Heidelberg€€numbered€939„68,€this€section€startsÐ P  Ðwith€the€variant€lines€as€given€in€òòWorksóó€2:362€n.€1„„lines€indeed€scored€through€in€MS€VIII.€Cook€andÐ Jš ÐÔ_ÔWedderburnÔ_Ôððs€description€is€correct€regarding€this€passage,€following€which€the€poem€continues€to€itsÐ D” Ðend€as€in€fair€copy.Ð >Ž Ðà  à€Schaffhausen,€€poem,€titled€by€Ruskin,€numbered€1148„59,€p.€70v€(òòWorksóó€2:366).€In€ms.,Ð 8ˆ ÐRuskin€entitled€these€lines€€Schaffhausen€;€but€in€the€Library€Edition,€the€lines€are€Ô_ÔretitledÔ_Ô€€Entrance€toÐ 2‚ ÐSchaffhausen.€€Note€that€these€lines€are€unexpectedly€numbered€1148„59,€overlapping€the€precedingÐ ,| Ðconclusion€to€€Heidelberg.€€If€the€overlap€reflects€the€collision€of€two€numbering€systems,€the€manuscriptÐ &v Ðnonetheless€gives€every€appearance€of€Ruskin€working€steadily€and€sequentially.€There€is€no€crowdingÐ  p Ðof€lines€that€would€suggest€the€preceding€€Heidelberg€€having€been€squeezed€into€place€above€aÐ j Ðpreexisting€€Schaffhausen.€€The€inconsistent€and€oddly€chosen€numbering€(the€first€numbered€line€in€Ð d ÐSchaffhausen€€is€€1151,€€four€lines€into€the€poem)€suggests,€rather,€that€Ruskin€was€trying€to€correctÐ ^ Ðsome€anomaly€elsewhere.€Also,€note€that€€Schaffhausen€€seems€incomplete,€the€final€punctuation€aÐ  X Ðcomma€in€draft.Ð !R Ðà  à€The€lake€smiled€sweetly,€and€the€boy,€€poem,€untitled,€unnumbered,€pp.€70v„71r,€unpublished.Ð ü!L ÐThis€is€no.€181,€which€I€have€followed€Cook€and€Ô_ÔWedderburnÔ_Ô€in€listing€separately€from€the€€Tour€€itself,Ð ö"F Ðno.€180€(see€note,€no.€181).€The€dozen€lines€are€not€included€in€Ruskinððs€numbering„„which€jumps€fromÐ ð#@  Ð1159,€at€the€end€of€the€preceding€poem€(€Schaffhausen€),€to€1160,€at€the€start€of€the€following€poem€(Ð ê$: ! ÐNot€such€the€night€whose€stormy€night€).€There€seems€every€reason€to€believe,€however„„from€styleÐ ä%4!" Ðand€content„„that€this€poem€belonged€to€the€€Tour€€project.€The€manuscript€shows€no€evidence€ofÐ Þ&."# Ðcrowding€or€wrapping€draft€around€€The€lake€smiled€sweetly,€€as€if€that€poem€occupied€that€space€fromÐ Ø'(#$ Ðsome€other€time;€rather,€the€hand€is€steady€throughout,€each€line€of€poetry€following€the€printed€rules€ofÐ Ò("$% Ðthe€notebook.€A€line€space€neatly€divides€€The€lake€smiled€sweetly€€from€€Schaffhausen€€preceding€it,Ð Ì)%& Ðand€another€line€space€divides€it€from€the€poem€following€it.Ð Æ*&' Ðà  à€Not€such€the€night€whose€stormy€might,€€poem,€untitled,€numbered€1160„82,€p.€71r€(òòWorksóóÐ À+'( Ð2:385„86;€entitled€by€editors,€not€Ruskin,€as€€Evening€at€Ô_ÔChamouniÔ_Ô€).€One€possible€reason€for€RuskinÐ º, () Ðomitting€numbering€the€lines€of€€The€lake€smiled€sweetly€€is€that€he€intended€to€connect€the€beginning€of€Ð ´-)* ÐNot€such€the€night€€(1160)€with€the€end€(1159)€of€€Schaffhausen€„„i.e.,€€Not€such€the€night€€should€beÐ ° Ðread€as€a€continuation€of€€Schaffhausen,€€which,€as€already€remarked,€appears€to€be€incomplete.Ð ªú Ðà  à€It€is€said€that€French€will€carry€you€over€all€Europe,€€prose,€untitled,€pp.€71v„72r€(òòWorksóóÐ ¤ô Ð2:358;€fair„copied€in€MS€IX).€€Most€beautiful€are€the€paths,€€prose,€untitled,€p.€72r€(òòWorksóó€2:364;Ð žî Ðpartly€fair„copied€in€MS€IX,€up€to€€ancient€granite,€sometimes€).Ð ˜è Ðà  àAt€this€point„„and€if€Ruskin€has€been€working€more€or€less€sequentially€in€MS€VIII,€the€timeÐ ’ â Ðwould€be€between€late€February€and€early€May€1834„„he€took€time€to€work€on€his€fatherððs€birthdayÐ Œ Ü Ðpoems€(see€no.€188).€First,€after€the€prose€fragment€€Most€beautiful€are€the€paths,€€occurs€the€first€21Ð † Ö Ðlines€of€what€Ruskin€will€entitle€€Vintage€€(no.€187,€pp.€72r„73v).€Between€these€lines€and€the€nextÐ € Ð Ðinstallment€Ô_ÔnotatedÔ_Ô€€Continuation€of€Vintage€€(77r„77v),€Ruskin€placed€the€birthday€poems,€€TheÐ z Ê  ÐCrystal€Hunter€€(no.€188,€pp.€72v„76r)€and€€The€Address€€(no.€192,€pp.€76r„77r).€It€is€equally€possibleÐ tÄ  Ðfor€€Vintage€€or€the€birthday€poems€to€have€been€composed€first:€either€€The€Crystal€Hunter€€was€begunÐ n¾  Ðin€the€middle€of€72v€and€€Vintage€€inserted€in€the€blank€space€preceding€the€birthday€poem,€orÐ h¸  Ðcomposition€of€€Vintage€€was€temporarily€halted€to€work€on€€The€Crystal€Hunter.€€What€is€moreÐ b²  Ðintriguing€is€whether€€Vintage€€should€be€regarded€as€part€of€the€tour€poem,€no.€180,€or€perhaps€as€anÐ \¬  Ðabortive€birthday€poem.€Ruskinððs€editors€decided€it€was€neither€and€left€it€unpublished.€Indeed,€whileÐ V¦ Ðthe€opening€description€of€grape€harvesting€on€the€Continent€might€connect€the€poem€with€no.€180,€theÐ P  Ðcomic€quarrel€in€the€€Continuation€€between€casks€of€wine€in€a€cellar€seems€inappropriate€for€the€tourÐ Jš Ðpoem€(and€the€poemððs€octameter€couplets€out€of€keeping,€as€well).€The€comic€poem€could€more€likelyÐ D” Ðbeen€launched€as€a€birthday€present.Ð >Ž Ðà  àThe€lines€of€no.€188,€€The€Crystal€Hunter,€€which€is€entitled€in€draft,€are€numbered€as€1183„Ð 8ˆ Ð1368„„picking€up€from€the€last€line€(1182)€of€€Not€such€the€night,€€even€though€€The€Crystal€Hunter€€isÐ 2‚ Ðclearly€distinct€from€the€Account.€In€the€opposite€margin,€Ruskin€did€additionally€number€the€linesÐ ,| Ðstarting€from€1€to€119€(he€abandoned€this€system€with€stanza€12,€because€he€began€transposingÐ &v Ðstanzas).€But€the€continuation€of€numbering€from€the€tour€poem€into€a€clearly€separate€project€showsÐ  p Ðthat€the€system€cannot€be€trusted€as€an€unambiguous€guide€to€the€Account.Ð j Ðà  àFollowing€€Continuation€of€Vintage,€€there€occurs€an€untitled€poem€(€The€foam€globes€roundÐ d Ðcome€riding€fast,€€pp.€77v„78r,€no€line€numbering)€that€the€Library€Edition€assigns€to€the€Account€(no.Ð ^ Ð180).€There€the€poem€is€paired€with€the€prose€piece€editorially€entitled€€The€Source€of€the€Ô_ÔArveronÔ_ԀР X Ð(òòWorksóó€2:387),€a€highly€speculative€choice€in€view€of€its€actual€position€in€draft.€The€draft€does€notÐ !R Ðeven€clearly€warrant€a€connection€with€the€Account,€except€for€the€poemððs€meter.Ð ü!L Ðà  àWhat€follows€does€definitely€return€to€the€Account:€€òòCont.€Heidelbergóó,€€prose,€titled€by€Ruskin,Ð ö"F Ðpp.€78r„78v€(òòWorksóó€2:364„65).€The€first€prose€paragraph€having€been€given€earlier€(and€only€part€ofÐ ð#@  Ðthat€fair„copied€in€MS€IX),€this€continuation€finishes€the€prose€section€as€printed€in€the€Library€Edition.Ð ê$: ! ÐIn€the€middle€of€this€paragraph,€however,€Ruskin€stopped€to€draft€eight€lines:€€So€broadly€stretched€inÐ ä%4!" Ðsapphire€sheet,€€poem,€untitled,€numbered€1369„76€(òòWorksóó€2:378).€These€lines€are€printed€in€theÐ Þ&."# ÐLibrary€Edition€as€the€closing€eight€lines€of€€Ô_ÔLagoÔ_Ô€Ô_ÔMaggioreÔ_Ô,€€I€do€not€know€on€what€grounds.€(TheÐ Ø'(#$ Ðfragmentððs€line€numbering,€1369„76,€tells€us€little,€merely€picking€up€from€the€last€line€number€of€€TheÐ Ò("$% ÐCrystal€Hunter.€)Ð Ì)%& Ðà  àAfter€the€eight„line€fragment,€Ruskin€gives€the€remainder€of€the€€Heidelberg€€prose€(78v„79r).Ð Æ*&' ÐThis€is€followed€by€€Genoa,€€poem,€titled€by€Ruskin,€numbered€1376„97,€pp.€79r„79v€(òòWorksóó€2:378„Ð À+'( Ð79).€Its€lines€19„44€appeared€earlier,€untitled;€here,€Ruskin€begins€the€poem€and€writes€through€to€linesÐ º, () Ð19„21,€indicating€the€overlap€with€ampersands€(€Of€various€trees€a€vista€green€&c.€/€Into€a€streamletÐ ´-)* Ðlooking€down€/€whose€living€crystal€shot€between€&€).€He€next€indicates€and€scores€through€the€last€lineÐ ° Ð(44)€of€the€previously€drafted€segment€(€x€Ô_ÔxÔ_Ô€x€/€€);€and€after€three€more€scoredÐ ªú Ðlines€(€€),€he€drafts€€Genoa€€from€line€45€to€the€end,€as€printed.Ð žî Ðà  àNext:€€Ô_ÔCadenabbiaÔ_Ô,€€poem,€titled€by€Ruskin,€numbered€1417„61,€pp.€79v„80v€(òòWorksóó€2:375„Ð ˜è Ð76).€€Villa€Ô_ÔPlinianaÔ_Ô,€€poem,€titled€by€Ruskin,€numbered€1462„84,€p.€80v€(òòWorksóó€2:376).Ð ’ â Ðà  àòòcóó)€About€December€of€1833,€while€working€on€no.€180,€Ruskin€inverted€MS€VIII€and€beganÐ Œ Ü Ðwriting€from€the€opposite€end€(on€what€would€be€pp.€262r„64r,€counting€from€the€front€of€theÐ † Ö Ðnotebook,€p.€264r€being€the€inside€of€the€back€flyleaf).€On€p.€264r€(inside€the€flyleaf),€he€entered€theÐ € Ð Ðtwo„stanza€French€poem€no.€182a,€followed€by€nos.€183€(pp.€264r„63v),€184€(pp.€263v„63r),€185Ð z Ê  Ð(pp.€263r„62v),€185a€(pp.€262v„62r),€185b€(p.€262r).€Nos.€185€and€185a€were€apparently€intendedÐ tÄ  Ðfor€New€Yearððs€1834.€Collingwood€misdated€this€section€as€a€year€later€(see€no.€183).Ð n¾  Ðà  àòòdóó)€In€December€1834,€skipping€over€31€leaves€following€the€last€entry€of€draft€for€no.€180€andÐ h¸  Ðpossibly€intending€to€devote€those€leaves€to€the€completion€of€the€tour€poem,€Ruskin€begins€a€newÐ b²  Ðsequence€of€shorter€poems,€mostly€Ô_ÔcelebratoryÔ_Ô€odes€for€John€James:€nos.€194€(pp.€112r„15v),€195Ð \¬  Ð(pp.€114r„v),€197€(pp.€115v„17r),€200€(pp.€117r„18v),€201€(pp.€118v„119r).Ð V¦ Ðà  àòòeóó)€In€the€space€between€òòbóó€and€òòdóó,€Ruskin€takes€up€a€new€project,€the€poetic€effusions€of€theÐ P  ÐContinental€tour€of€1835:€nos.€207€(pp.€81r„v),€208€(pp.€81v„82r),€209€(pp.€82r„92v),€211€(p.€92v„Ð Jš Ð93r),€212€(pp.€93r„103r).€See€nos.€207€and€209€for€speculation€about€how€MS€VIII€may€have€beenÐ D” Ðused€during€this€stage€of€composition.€Nos.€211„12€could€also€have€been€spurred€by€Ô_ÔAdleÔ_Ô€Ô_ÔDomecqÔ_ÔððsÐ >Ž Ðearly€1836€visit,€discussed€in€òògóó,€below.Ð 8ˆ Ðà  àòòfóó)€This€section€of€MS€VIII€is€the€most€conjectural€in€the€notebook€in€terms€of€dating.€It€is€notÐ 2‚ Ðeven€certain€whether€these€poems€should€be€treated€òòasóó€a€group.€Possibly€at€about€the€same€time€as€òòeóó,Ð ,| Ðor€just€following€that€time,€Ruskin€skipped€to€this€section,€which€follows€òòdóó.€The€poems€placed€hereÐ &v Ðcould€have€arisen€from€the€tour€of€1835:€nos.€210€(pp.€119v„120r),€213€(pp.€120v„23r),€214€(pp.Ð  p Ð123r„v).€See€those€nos.,€however,€for€problems€in€dating€and€even€ambiguities€in€their€presumedÐ j Ðsubject€matter.Ð d Ðà  àòògóó)€Returning€to€where€òòeóó€left€off,€Ruskin€further€fills€the€space€between€òòbóó€and€òòdóó€with€a€series€ofÐ ^ Ðpoems€about€Ô_ÔAdleÔ_Ô€Ô_ÔDomecqÔ_Ô:€nos.€217€(p.€103v),€218€(p.€104r),€219€(pp.€104v„105r),€220€(pp.€105r„Ð  X Ðv),€221€(pp.€105v„106r),€222€(p.€106r),€225€(pp.€106r„v),€226€(p.€106v),€227€(p.€107r),€228€(pp.Ð !R Ð107r„v),€229€(p.€107v),€232€(pp.€108r„v),€233€(p.€108v),€234€(pp.€108v„109v),€235€(pp.€109v„110r),Ð ü!L Ð236€(pp.€110r„v),€237€(p.€110v),€238€(p.€111r),€239€(p.€111v),€240€(p.€111v).€The€composition€of€thisÐ ö"F Ðseries€could€have€strung€along€for€quite€some€time€(see€note,€e.g.,€to€no.€240).€No.€240€is€written€in€twoÐ ð#@  Ðparallel€columns€in€order€to€fit€the€poem€into€remaining€space€on€a€verso;€the€following€recto€wasÐ ê$: ! Ðalready€taken€up€by€no.€194,€which€had€begun€section€òòdóó€above.Ð ä%4!" Ðà  àòòhóó)€In€May€1836,€in€space€following€òòfóó,€Ruskin€inserts€nos.€231€(pp.€123v„124v)€and€241€(pp.Ð Þ&."# Ð124v„57r).Ð Ø'(#$ Ðà  àòòÔ_ÔiÔ_Ôóó)€Following€no.€241,€pp.€257v„59v€are€blank.€Then€on€p.€260r€occur€a€Latin€exercise€andÐ Ò("$% Ðsome€geometry€figures.€Since€Ruskin€was€being€tutored€in€geometry€by€1833„34€(see€no.€173),€theseÐ Ì)%& Ðexercises€fall€easily€within€the€parameters€of€the€use€of€MS€VIII.€After€this€page€of€schoolwork,€pp.Ð Æ*&' Ð260v„261v€are€blank,€meeting€up€with€the€Ô_ÔreversoÔ_Ô€text€òòcóó€coming€from€the€other€end€of€the€notebook.Ð À+'( Ðà  àòòjóó)€The€back€boards€are€Ô_ÔareÔ_Ô€filled€with€an€elaborate€outline€for€no.€180.€Collingwood€refers€toÐ º, () Ðthis€list€as€projecting€€150€pieces€of€prose€and€poetry,€and€at€least€as€many€drawings€€for€the€finishedÐ ´-)* Ðversion€in€MS€IX,€which€was€not€carried€that€far€(òòWorksóó€2:340€n.€1).€The€boards€are€reproduced€inÐ ° ÐòòWSóó€fig.€6b€(and€see€p.€50).Ð ªú Ðà  àòòkóó)€The€front€boards€contain€pencil€and€ink€doodles,€mainly€of€dogs€and€crystals,€and€someÐ ¤ô Ðfragmentary€writing,€mainly€about€geology.